I've recently read some of the feedback on other people's work, and I thought I would try to apply some of what I read on my little work in progress:)
I layered some things differently this time, as well as changing some of the parameters on a couple of the instruments, notably attack and decay. I also added a small bit of my own "flair" to a couple of sections, as well as fiddling with EQ and compression. Feedback is appreciated !:)
I like it and it's in my MW playlist, but at times it borrows elements heavily from the source without mixing it up enough, like with 2:45-3:45. It's still enjoyable. Just sometimes more of a cover than a full remix.
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The Seas - Heroes of Might and Magic II (TheWingless)
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Title Theme - Pikmin 3 (pixeltea)
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Oldies But Happies - Hideki Naganuma
The Concept of Love - Hideki Naganuma
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You have a great start in terms of anatomical structure and shading. Keep practicing, the more you do, the better you become!
May I recommend Stephen Peck's Atlas of Anatomy? Very good book indeed, especially for references.