Posted 06 July 2014 - 01:46 PM
Wow, I can't remember the last time I saw a Broderbund symbol. Where in the world IS Carmen Sandiego, anyway?
I will say this genre is not my forte, but I think I can still offer some constructive criticism to bring it to the next level.
-Melody pickup at 1:09 could be a bit stronger. The wubs, as Timaeus said, do bury it a bit. You might try to find some more creative ways to get it to come out - panning, compression, etc. Experiment.
- In a similar vein, those arps that go on top of the wub could come out a bit. Just a touch.
- I could probably take a little more of the kick drum throughout. It's not doing as good of a job as I think it could supporting the whole mix. Maybe some more "thwap" in the 2k range or punch compression might help it really cut through.
- I personally don't have a problem with the lead at 1:39
- Arrangement wise, it's a little short, but still well within OCR guidelines.
Great job with this, and best of luck!