Posted 24 February 2013 - 05:31 PM
First, some timbre stuff.
The wubs are okay, but they're too resonant, or you're modulating them between weird cutoff frequencies that emphasize the resonance. They're also the same the whole time, maybe even the same patch modulated a lot with automation. Change the patch or make the pattern more interesting.
The supersaw is alright for this, but the bass that comes in at 0:07 is sounding like it's clashing with it.
The snare is too soft. Needs low end punch and a boost in the volume.
The kick is either too soft, too bassy, or both. Layer some more, give it some low end snap.
When you've got the wubs going on, they're much too loud. I can barely hear the lead.
Unclear. I can't hear the leads, and the wubs are repetitive, so there's no real structure yet.