Best Dude55 Posted February 5, 2016 Share Posted February 5, 2016 Hello everyone! So, I recently wanted to get some more practice in arrangement and making remixes with more original aspects. So I chose this theme, since it is only about 20 seconds before the loop. It was pretty fun taking a 20 second song and making this remix, and feedback is appreciated! Source: Remix: https://app.box.com/s/7bk0n65r1h7vqvsakmgtef1zfzppyjq9 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trinity Dragon Posted February 7, 2016 Share Posted February 7, 2016 It's really happy-go-lucky. Loved the piano intro, too. Great mix so far. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best Dude55 Posted February 10, 2016 Author Share Posted February 10, 2016 oh, thanks! Any suggestions on how to improve it by chance? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Newtmanking Posted February 10, 2016 Share Posted February 10, 2016 This really reminds me of the Medley of Pokemon/ Medley of Kirby remixes by Hapi. I really enjoy this one, and I feel like it could be close to a finished product. The only thing that I might be interested in is if you replace the melody at the end with piano. That could give the piece a full-circle ending, just something to look into. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best Dude55 Posted February 14, 2016 Author Share Posted February 14, 2016 Cool, thanks! I'll see what it sounds like if I use that piano at the end! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tex Posted February 16, 2016 Share Posted February 16, 2016 Piano section sounds too quiet compared to the rest. Intro was short and the transition at 0:17 was too sudden and in a different key (which makes the intro feel detached from the rest). Add vibrato to your leads to prevent them from sounding straight. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best Dude55 Posted February 24, 2016 Author Share Posted February 24, 2016 Alrighty, so I made a few changes to the remix to see how it sounded. Mainly, I adjusted some volume levels that I thought might be too much/too little. I also tried out just a ouple different instruments in some small places, such as in the sort of buildup section. Here's the current version: https://app.box.com/s/00f4l1hhqp9e5il6xf9xrcs5211hk7dl Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best Dude55 Posted March 4, 2016 Author Share Posted March 4, 2016 Alrighty! So mainly just some small changes here and there. Probably the biggest thing I did in this version was add a little countermelody at 1:59, since it sounded a little empty there with just the one synth playing. Other than that, just small changes from the previous version. link: https://app.box.com/s/7bk0n65r1h7vqvsakmgtef1zfzppyjq9 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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