Feedback Plz

[Hello_World]

Hello Everyone! I made this song a little while ago and would like to know what you all think. I want to make more songs like this but I'm not sure yet. Thank you!

 

[FTCosta]

A very good tune overall. I'd say it's flawless if not for the A note at 0:21-0:23. I don't know if it was intentional, but it came off too strong and vibrant and out of key. When the same A shows up again at 0:30, it sounds much better placed.

[Hello_World]

Thank you, I'm pretty sure it wasn't intentional haha. I appreciate your listening to my song and your feedback