Yeah, I know it's been done to death - Terra

[Gramage]

http://gramage.corruptspace.com/MP3/Terra%20Firma.mp3

By no means finished, just messing around really. I quite like the second melody on the Koto when it's in with Terra on the Zither.

[Draconiator]

First off, I LOVE the Eastern flavor in this one, and it also sounds somewhat like "Cleopactra" on the N64 version of "Ms. Pac Man: Maze Madness", it's great as is, but I think SOMETHING's missing....I don't know what...Maybe if you added the other part of the original song, and fill it out a little bit more, (I totally can hear square waves arpeggiator-style would help a bit, fading in and out) it'll be even better than it is now. But DO NOT CHANGE WHAT YOU ALREADY HAVE! I dig this, I really do, but right now, it's...eh. It's good, but it's not great.

6/10

[Gramage]

Yeah, it's a little skin and bones right now. I went with the eastern instruments because, well, I love that feel. Thanks for the feedback :)

[Vidilian]

As you've said, add some meat to these bones and you could have a sweet mix. I like the kinda hip hop beat its got, expand on that too. I recommend adding other eastern instruments, like a shakuhachi flute (typical japanese sounding instrument).

[chthonic]

my biggest complaint is the direct transcription of the melody

add some extra notes, vary the rhythm, something

I'm talking about at the very beginning, btw

[ocremixfan]

It's more an arrangement than an oc remix. The style is good, but you need to give the melody (more of) your personal touch.