first attempt at a house song

[Radiowar]

Just playing random chords on my keyboard and this came out. This is my first time doing house music that sounds at least somewhat authentic (to me anyways). Includes terrible synth soloing.

http://alexhhhh.googlepages.com/residence.mp3

[GeckoYamori]

You got a solid foundation. Just try varying the chords a bit. Maybe try some bass slides as well. Aside from that there's just production/sound quality issues but I'm guessing you didn't want to focus on that.

[Radiowar]

You got a solid foundation. Just try varying the chords a bit. Maybe try some bass slides as well. Aside from that there's just production/sound quality issues but I'm guessing you didn't want to focus on that.

Cool, thanks. I'll play around with the chords and the bass a bit. But about the production issues, I know there's some clipping and the synth is bit piercing when it hits the high parts...were you talking about something else?