No Choice (original)

[jmr]

NEW: NOW WITH SYNTH SOLO!
[MP3 - 3.41MB] jmr - No Choice (public WIP 2) (http://jmr.sitesled.com/jmr_nochoice_pwip2.mp3)
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Here's something original that I've been working on for some time now. It's my first real attempt at something in this genre, so please take it easy on me.

[MP3 - 2.63MB] jmr - No Choice (public WIP 1) (http://jmr.sitesled.com/jmr_nochoice_pwip1.mp3)

I'm using a drum loop from one of the FLMC packs, and I've hardly changed it at all. Before I call this track finished, I plan on changing it up, at least a little bit.

The ending is currently in an unfinished state. Everything after 1:22 is obviously incomplete. I'd like to add some sort of synth solo to that section, but the creative juices kinda stopped flowing. I thought it would be a good idea to post what I've completed as of now, just to see if I'm heading in the right direction.

Any comments, criticism, and especially suggestions are welcomed.

[jmr]

New version; link in the above post. What do you guys think of the solo?

[PlastikBag]

This sounds great so far. I dig the dual synth solo.

[ambinate]

I'll be honest, dude, I don't really know shit about this type of music, but this just sounds really cool to my ears. I think the lead synth sounds you're using are great, and that dual solo is wicked. Again, I can't speak from a knowledgeable standpoint on this, but I'm really enjoying it. That little fuzzy hiss in the intro before everything comes in is suave. Damn, I'm saving this.

[John Revoredo]

'diggin this!.. SOunds cool, and although the base keeps repeating, you managed the song not to sound repetitive by adding a diverse structure.:-D

Cool solo!.. It's definitely the best of the song, and it's pretty original, because it has been rarely seen in a electronica song!.

Good work, man! :-D