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Pyromuffin
09-04-2007, 07:58 PM
Original work, I think it turned out pretty well. I'm especially looking for comments on the ending and piano sequences, but any feedback is appreciated.

Linky: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5742207&q=hi

KnockKnock
09-05-2007, 08:19 PM
this is pretty sweet. it sounds like the instruments aren't all playing in the same key, but then again neither does 'only a northern song'. i can't find anything wrong with it, but it leaves a little to be desired, perhaps some sort of structure, as it's already quite all over the place.