New soft-electro track from me! Feedback appreciated.

[Cyan]

Hi people, I'm working on a new original track and need some feeback before I'm proceding further. Style is chill-out, minimalistic/Groove/synth/psy-electronica. Or something like that.

I haven't paid too much attention at panning, reverb and the bigger part of the production at this point. Just focusing on vibe, sounds and harmonies. I would be happy if you leave a comment of what you think, suggestions etc.

http://jimmyem.googlepages.com/Cyan_-_Triangel_Light.mp3

/Cyan

[Groovemaster303]

Not bad i'm not really a fan of slow chilled out music but this is alright IMO.

It's a little quiet but that's nothing that can't be fixed in a jiffy.
Keep up the good work

[KnockKnock]

this is nice. sort of takes me back to earlier days of ocr in terms of instrumentation. it's pretty damn classy though. love how you used the chiptunes and the slow attack filter synth leads. maybe create more of an outro as it ends a little too abruptly.

[Jacian]

Fantastic. Very well done. A little work with panning, and a bit of reverb could really make this song a well done piece. I love the feel a lot. Make it a bit louder and it'd be the bomb :-) Check out my track as well and tell me what you think:

Check my work (To The Spinning Tower) - OverClocked ReMix Forums (http://www.ocremix.org/forums/showthread.php?t=11885)

Good job
~jace