Deep WIP

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I've noticed that a lot of the music I work on with my desktop sounds complete different on other speakers (my home stereo or car speakers)... so I can see just now listening to it that the levels are off, but what I really want is some input or suggestions on how to better fill this song out, maybe a direction or something like that. I know its pretty empty in its current form, there's no fading, etc, but I've only had FL for about a month, and I can't figure out how to work with envelopes and such yet. Thanks much in advance!

EDIT: whee... I bet a link would help.

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Deep (WIP) (http://www.dcmperformance.com/music/Deep_WIP_release.mp3)