*NO* Section Z 'Back to Square One' *FT*

[Protricity]

Ryan8bit has worked long and hard after many tips and critiques from me and other people. This is what his song has turned into. Yet, I do not think it is in anyway important how long or hard he has worked on it, it deserves the same chance as any other. So I wont vote on it.

[Malcos]

Timing is off on various elements in this mix, particularly in the second half, (2.12 onwards). Sounds ok otherwise.

But the timing really is quite bad.

NO

[DarkCecil13]

Yeah, the timing is quite off here. It takes an effort to listen to it. Regardless of that, there are some pretty cool synths (not to mention the distortion guitar). Though, the timing just kills :x

NO

[analoq]

so, none of the people ryan8bit talked to told him that this had bad timing problems?

aside from that, the guitar is too loud and just plain annoying at times. There are some cool synth sounds but they are buried by other things. Some parts are very cool, like at 1:20ish and 2:57ish. Bass is tight. But things just are put together well enough, I think this mix would benefit from a resubmit.

no

[Disco Dan]

Once again, the girl on the phone (http://www.onemodelplace.com/model_list.cfm?ID=14784) has some input on this song:

"What the hell is that? Your printer?"

So I think that speaks for itself.

NO

But seriously, it's very ... loose. Like a 45 year old prostitute. And I can't tell if the guitars being out of tune is on purpose or not. I DO like the sound of the section between 1:18 and 1:32. But other than that, the rest sounds very dry, repetitive, and a slight bit out of tune.

D