*NO* Phantasy Star 4 'Motavian Battlefield'

[djpretzel]

The original song is the Phantasy Star 4 battle theme. My version is entitled "Motavian Battlefield". I have uploaded it to or, if that does not work, it can be found at . You can credit it to Andrew Aversa (but use "dj zircon") with help from Colin Eichinger ("Rebel Faction"). You can include this email, but not the website since I am still working on it. I am not sure if the song's ID tag is correct, since the full title could not fit; I had to use the second id tag type. It is about 2.4mb and in mp3 format, so I think it is acceptable by the submission guidelines.

Thank you in your advance for your time,

Andrew Aversa

[Protricity]

I like the starting beat. The sequencing is good, but there are moments of weakly organized parts, namely the hits at 15, and some parts in the middle.
THis song is far too short, and the ending is weak.

Please resubmit longer, sounds pretty good!

NO

[Malcos]

The programming in this mix is good, there are some parts where I'm not sure about the mixing (some synths seem too loud compared to the drums). It's a little short, and the ending cuts off. This needs a little more work.

NO

[Vig]

very cool, but its barely two minutes. make longer, and resubmit.

NO

[djpretzel]

delay-breaker: No

Sounds like more work and a resubmission are warranted...