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djpretzel
07-08-2003, 02:42 AM
Shadowgate_Symphony_OC_Remix.mp3, email sub, no other info provided -djp

Protricity
07-10-2003, 04:12 AM
The style is continuous. The drumfills are all the same. I would suggest more varried drum fills and perhaps a more intersting drum progression.

This follows the original rather exactly. The bells have a bit of floody release. Notes never change, and finally, its only 2 minutes.

Work on song length, change up the style perhaps, along with the beat and the melody.

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Beatdrop
07-10-2003, 05:55 AM
Er, wow. This is really really really repetitive. The mixing's bad, the song's generally quite loud, and all of the sounds seem to have come from a very cheap sound module.

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Israfel
07-16-2003, 11:47 PM
The arrangement here isn't really that bad- it manages to really highlight some of the strengths of the original and the voice leading that's used here is pretty effective.

But I also agree with the comments of the judges:

a bit too repetitive, there's really only one musical idea here that's looped about 3 or 4 times.

the mixing needs work- the drums are perhaps too loud, and the whole mix sounds like either the mids or highs are up a little too much, resulting in a generally abrasive sound.

I'd stick with it though- this sounds like you've got some real talent and just need some more practice.

But for now,
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Vig
07-17-2003, 12:56 AM
there is....so much clipping....its constant.

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Oh, and as for the mix itself, it's short, it repeats, and it maintains the same dynamic level throughout the whole mix.