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HoboKa
03-14-2008, 09:59 PM
Hey guys, I believe that I've improved, and this here wip might just prove it. It has a bit of a Command & Conquer and oddly enough, a Blade Runner-ish motif to the song that I think worked quite well. Enjoy.

Link: http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/pshw/Space_Audacity

Nav
03-16-2008, 05:55 AM
Interesting track. Intro really emphasizes the nice fuzz on the drums. The drums do feel a bit pushed to the back. I liked the stereo effects, but I feel like its a bit unbalanced towards the left ear... Try to put a counter synth to the right, so it evens out the stereo field.

Nice synths and effects. Eerie, and the organ does a great job of setting the mood. I could see a Theremin fitting well in here. Yeah, I can see the C&C influences here. I would've liked a drum break midway... the drums do a good job of changing up, but I wish that it would stop somewhere, for a light break, or a bridge to a second part.

Overall, nice song! Quite interesting. Keep it up!

HoboKa
03-18-2008, 10:52 PM
Thanks Navij :), definitely my best piece so far ^^