super mario galaxy - teresa race

[Txai]

Original (http://www.fileupyours.com/view/149382/Teresa%20Race.mp3)

Remix (http://www.fileupyours.com/view/149382/Txai%20-%20Floating%20like%20a%20Ghost.mp3)

It was an idea I had to bring new feelings for this theme. I like using small wave samples to write music. So this is how it turned out.

[Tables]

First of all, thank you SO much, I was looking for this song for a while and I had no idea what it was called until now! And I have it now too, yay.

As for your remix, I like what you're doing with the melody but the piece feels really empty, there should be some more stuff happening in the background (even for a mellow piece). Plus, while I see you added some nice original 'spinoffs' from the theme occasionally, I think its just a little too close to the source.

Keep it up though, you have a cool start.

[The Derrit]

So did you just use the original instruments and rearrange them a lil bit?

[Txai]

There is no square wave on the original.

[Psychog13]

The intrument you are using sounds ace, but ir definatly needs accompanyment I think. Also it seems that rather than upgrading it it looks like u took the best part of the tune out and downgraded it :P

its also very hard to make an almost perfect tune better (all the tracks from galaxy are pretty awsome) unless you completely change the feel of it ( and in most cases masacre the source hehe ^-^; )

Well either way reguardless of that it still sounded good mate, some serious potential, keep that square coming! ^-^
(also sorry if this sounded too critical, i really did like it :P)