*NO* Yoshi's Story 'Island Echoes'

[djpretzel]

OK .. here's the deal. In August of last year, I submitted a remix to OCR.
It kind of fell through the cracks, so on Wednesday, February 12, I
submitted Yoshi's Story 'Island Echoes' OC ReMix in its place, and I haven't
got a response since. I of course realized the delay long ago, but have been
putting off this e-mail for a long time.

Title: Yoshi's Story 'Island Echoes' OC ReMix
By: Kooper909

Also! On my Remixer Info page, please add this image:
http://www.fortestar.com/images/Avatar_Kooper909.jpg

And change my home page address to http://www.fortestar.com/ , please.

Thank you very much. I would really appreciate it if you could rush this ... it's been a year. I could have had a baby by now! ;)

[Protricity]

This is a nice intro for a song. At 2:23 you should start the actual song. Get into something.

This is just an intro.

Go for more.

NO

[Malcos]

Hmm, this has promise, but then doesn't deliver on that promise. The problem for me is that this is all on one level, no climax, no breakdown, no change or transitions in the whole song with regard to mood or direction. One gets bored towards the end of the second half. I would say keep the magical sound of the mix and develop this into something more after about a minute and a half.

NO

[GrayLightning]

Yep, as malcos mentioned, this mix is just magical. I am enjoying the whole style of this mix. Main problem here is, it needs more development and expansion. Either increase the instrumentation or add more complexity to the composition. I agree this is a great start, but its shortness does leave an unsatisfying feeling. It feels like it's part of a much grander mix that never comes.

NO for now. Please consider resubmitting after more work has been done.

[Vig]

yeah...this is an intro, this is too short, it doesnt develop, etc. and i have some problems with the piano encoding in the turnaround.

Basically, this needs more.

NO