*NO* Final Fantasy 4 'Don't Look Away'

[djpretzel]

This is my second submission to your site. It's a rendition of "Theme of Love" from Final Fantasy 4, my favorite song of the series.


Hope you enjoy it.

[Israfel]

Couple problems here:

---first of all the sample has a sort of toy-ish quality
---The excessive amount of sustain creates a dissonant and muddy quality- particularly in the lower register
---the loud, accented notes in the bass don't make a whole lot of musical sense


NO

[Protricity]

Fluid, fake sounding, short lived piano piece here.
Lots of weak chords around the 1:12 area. Some real .. ugly chords to follow.

Sorry, just practice at it. Needs improvement on arrangement, sound quality, chords.

NO

[Vig]

some notes are horribly off-key, and the lower notes are muddy as hell.

raise the whole thing an octave. i can barely hear what's going on.

NO

[GrayLightning]

I enjoyed this piece on a musical level. I like your style. There are a lot of problems here that the other judges mentioned that bar this from going through. The main one is the muddy, and cloudy quality. It sounds too muzzled, there's no clarity.

This also needs more work on the arrangement level and bringing it all together. More polish is needed. I hope you come back to this and fix up the technical problems.

NO