New WIP electro track from me! Feedback appreciated.

[Cyan]

Hi, I'm in the process of making this electro-tune, but need some suggestions feedback etc until going further. I haven't paid to much attention to production values yet, which explains no panning and wery little effectprocessing.
Well, enjoy.

UPDATE! It's now close to finish. I'm a little unsure about some stuff, but that's why I need YOUR opinion!

Feedback please. :)

http://jimmyem.googlepages.com/Cyan_-_The_Jinxed_Jigsaw.mp3

[Cyan]

bump, updated!

[Meteo Xavier]

I'll make a judgement for yours if you make a judgement for mine.