*NO* Final Fantasy 6 'Little Painter Girl'

[djpretzel]

Problems elsewhere (drums) but excellent work with the syncopation in places - djp


Hi,

Two Submissions:

Remix Name: Little Painter Girl
Remix of: Relm's Theme
Game: Final Fantasy 6
Available at:

Remix Name: Half Missing
Remix of: Terra's Theme / Haunted Forest
Game: Final Fantasy 6
Available at:

From Remixer: Adam Dachis
E-mail: amd@quon.net
Website: http://www.princessofjustice.com

Also, I submitted a remix a little while ago (Vermilion) and I made some changes to it so you probably haven't listened to it yet but in case you have the new version is at the same URL.

Thanks!
Adam

[DarkeSword]

I love Relm's theme. Don't mess it up. ^_^

Okay. The drum track sounds really extraneous. There are some nice change-ups, but it gets a bit repetitive.

Sounds to me that the piano is just too loud too, compared to the drum track so there's a balace issue. Sounds like the drummer is sitting WAAAAAY in the back of a big room, and the piano is right up near the door, and we're standing in the doorway.

The piano is pretty nice though.

I'm going to say NO on this one, but please consider fixing up the piece. Maybe eliminating the drum track altogether would help?

[Protricity]

One at a time, please

Problem here is that this mix is somewhat amateur. Percussion does not match the momentum of the piano. It just loops drums regardless of what the piano is doing.

Great variation and improve, but far far far too remote from the original song.

NO

[danny B]

Like it's been said, ditch the drums, work on the sound quality as a separate, dynamic piano arrangement. Then I'll consider it.

NO

-D

[Vig]

The drums are akward in general. i'd say get rid of them, then the piece would at least make sense.

apart from that, around the 1 minute mark there are some serious harmonic and rhythmical flubbs in the piano part.

the mix is too sparse. drop the drums, add something else, and add a few more minutes.


NO