*NO* Marathon 'Transport When Ready'

[djpretzel]

Here is an OC Remix submission for your enjoyment...

Song URL:


2.3 MB, 2:33, 128 kbps joint stereo

Song Name: Marathon Transport When Ready OC Remix
Game: Marathon
Original Song Name: Leela
Composer: Alexander Seropian
Artist: Clockwork Dolphin (dietrich@zdome.net)

Marathon was a wonderful game that came out for the Macintosh around 1994, it had a great story and unbeatable mood. This was my favorite track until I finally played the entire game and heard the music on the last level, ah well. There isn't very much original material to work with and I didn't want to stray too far, so I kept it short.

Since this is my first remix...
Email: dietrich@zdome.net
Website: http://zdome.net/~dietrich/

Thanks,
--Dietrich

[Protricity]

Not very much original material? I can tell.

Theres hardly anything going on in this song. This is like a pretty good accompany to a vocal song, but hardly much of anything as it is.

Pretty cool, but it could have been far more developed.

Still, I'm impressed. UGH borderline.

NO

DEVELOP!!!!!!!!!!

[Vig]

Not much development, the guitar is out of tune and otherwise sounds weak and thin.

give us more.

NO

[GrayLightning]

I don't know what more can be said when both judges have nailed the main problem of this mix. This needs more development. I would also suggest more attention be paid to panning. Neat concept and I like the ambient nature, but this needs more work. Consider expanding this another minute or two.

Borderline NO

[djpretzel]

As GL said, the main problems with the mix have been articulated. Final NO vote.