Link to the Past: Elevate First Remix

[jayt11]

I wrote and recorded this rap song to Po!'s Legend of Zelda 'hyrulecastledarkworld' beat. Shout out to po! for the hot track! Hope you guys like it.

http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/song_2583102

[Pope]

I'm not particularly a fan of this style of rap/hip-hip. It seems more chill/old school that the overproduced modern stuff I like to listen to. Therefore, I'm probably not the best for feedback, but here's what I think anyway:

I liked the vinyl scratch sound at the beginning and the end (though I almost always like when people do that). I'm not sure how I feel about the radio station change thing, as it seems sort of overdone. But then again, it kind of fits in this context, as you're taking the listener from the light world to the dark world. Gives a reason for the transition.

I like the background music. It's simple, but I would say effective.

I would like to hear what this song sounds like if you were to reduce or even remove the reverb on the vocals altogether. It might not be good, but it would be worth it to at least see how it sounded with crisp, dry vocals, rather than with the reverb.

Speaking of the vocals, from what I could clearly understand, I think the lyrics are quite good. Could you post the lyrics on here so we can pick up on some things which are a little more challenging to the ear? That would rule.

Keep it up.