Feedback for Dick Gumshoe Remix

[eppskevin]

I don't see a lot of remixes out there(I just saw one posted, but did this back in September), and wanted to try my hand at it.

This has more of a hip hop flavor to it. Any suggestions are certainly welcome! Thanks!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ueNWQmuxelk

[eppskevin]

Sent wrong link:

This is the most updated link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bqy50SdTVEM

[eppskevin]

I'm actually waiting patiently, but just bumping so that it doesn't get buried.

[Emperor Charlemagne]

I think you can cut out the first four bars, and tone done the bass a smidge, while at the same time bringing out the melody a bit more. Or rather, the 'theme portion' a bit more, because it takes a bit too long to become recognizable.

I say an instrument here or there on top of the game midi you placed in, toning down the bass, and removing some extraneous repeats (like the first 4 bars and similar cases, though not ALL of them, of course).

It ain't bad, all things considered.