*NO* Metroid 2 'Main Road to Ruin'

[djpretzel]

Remixer name: Shadowlarkmoon

Well to tell the truth I have no idea if this is what you guys ment about the submitting rule, but i have been bugging about it for like a month now cause i wasnt sure how this would work. anyway ill just try this thing. The name of the song is Main Road to Ruin. It is a remix of the main tunnel theme from Metroid 2: The Return of Samus.

E-mail: Shadowlarkmoon@yahoo.com

[Liontamer]

http://www.zophar.net/gbs/metroid2.zip - Track 3

I'll give you credit in altering the rhythms of the original, though the arrangement was still relatively conservative. The electrosynths chosen were very flat and homogenous-sounding enough in their various combinations where it was a huge detriment to the track. Nothing in the way of dynamics or build was present. The section from 2:52-3:16 was pretty haphazard sounding. The ending limped to the finish. Very static and unengaging track overall.

NO

[Digital Coma]

Simplistic and generic usage of synths, repetitive, and unoriginal.

NO

[GrayLightning]

Simplistic and generic usage of synths, repetitive, and unoriginal.

NO

Binnie about covered it.

I'm sorry, this needs a lot of work. I'm sure you spent time on it, but a lot more polish is required at this stage. I suggest you post your mixes to the OCR WIP forum for more feedback before submitting. http://www.ocremix.org/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=13

Below the bar material, but not horrible. This needs more work on the arrangement, concept, execution and production. Keep practicing and working.

NO

[The wingless]

When I click on the link, it sends me on an endless loop of infinity.

[DarkeSword]

Yeah, ridiculously simple, with gimmicky arpeggiation and terribly generic sounds. No development either.

NO