Zelda 64 - Garden Water

[Bak.R]

A remix of the serenade of water, new age and relaxing song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uHK5q5fnSyU

What do you think about it?

Bak.R

[Monobrow]

Relaxing, but from the horrible quality of your Youtube (not recommended), I think the piano is too piercing and doesn't have enough release, needs more pedal, and probably doesn't need to be struck so hard every time.

I'd add little nuances to the piano writing, if you intend to keep doing like 1 note every measure progression, just do little chords with your left hand, subtle ones, and maybe slight (echoey) subtle notes after some of your piano notes (way softer)...

Also not much more to say since it is 1 minute. Needs more source tune and needs to go somewhere. Good luck, it is pretty.