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Capt. Stupidity
01-10-2011, 05:38 PM
I am trying my hand at a solo piano piece (synthesized, not live). The basic melody is pretty much done. I might lengthen it a bit. Flourishes will be added, but for the most part I want to keep it simple, nothin' fancy.

Mostly, I am looking for feedback on how the song flows, humanization, and if the track is at all interesting (i.e. not repetitive).

http://soundcloud.com/ezlo/slile-suzavka-wip-v-1

erineclipse
01-10-2011, 07:33 PM
Rather melancholic I'd say, a little bit on the repetitive side but in this case I think that works in your favor.

AngelsDen
01-10-2011, 10:32 PM
The Bridge from 1:32.. the transition to it doesnt sound to good. It disturbs the whole feeling that you grab at again later. Although this is an atmospherical- cold menchaolic piece with a decent arrangement i would like to recommend you to give it a tiny bit more depth...

This piece would fit well into flashback Movie scenes or wastelands in Games.