"Industrial Intrusion" a new version of my track "Industrial Ruins"

[Dr. Mack Foxx]

"Industrial Intrusion" http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/413303 is a more frantic-sounding version of my first original song "Industrial Ruins" http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/378759

"Industrial Intrusion" is only my third original song so far. What do you think of it? If you ask me, this tune would be good for a boss battle, an escape sequence or other such things in a video game. Hope you enjoy this track! :)

[Flo Jess]

The music is well, but a little bit repetitive. The athmosphere is well returned. Try to vary the music, for example make the beginning more quiet, and then something more intense in sound.

[Dr. Mack Foxx]

The music is well, but a little bit repetitive. The athmosphere is well returned. Try to vary the music, for example make the beginning more quiet, and then something more intense in sound.

Ah. I see. :nod: Thank you very much for checking out my song and for the suggestions. :) I'm learning as I go and I really appreciate the feedback. Thanks!