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Dr. Mack Foxx
04-15-2011, 08:38 PM
"Industrial Intrusion" http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/413303 is a more frantic-sounding version of my first original song "Industrial Ruins" http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/378759

"Industrial Intrusion" is only my third original song so far. What do you think of it? If you ask me, this tune would be good for a boss battle, an escape sequence or other such things in a video game. Hope you enjoy this track! :)

Flo Jess
04-15-2011, 09:41 PM
The music is well, but a little bit repetitive. The athmosphere is well returned. Try to vary the music, for example make the beginning more quiet, and then something more intense in sound.

Dr. Mack Foxx
04-15-2011, 10:45 PM
The music is well, but a little bit repetitive. The athmosphere is well returned. Try to vary the music, for example make the beginning more quiet, and then something more intense in sound.

Ah. I see. :nod: Thank you very much for checking out my song and for the suggestions. :) I'm learning as I go and I really appreciate the feedback. Thanks!