*NO* Myst 'Unfinale Theme'

[djpretzel]

Contact Info:
Preferred Remixer name : eritenel
Real Name : Batu Eritenel
Email Address : eritenel@isbank.net.tr

Remix Info:
Name of Game Remixed: Myst
Additional Info about Myst can bu found here: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0158814/ (Original Myst was first published for Mac Only.)
Link to the Original Soundtrack:
Here is the link to the Remix:


Sincerely,

Batu Eritenel

[Liontamer]

Myst ~ The Soundtrack - (22) Un-Finale

Well, I can say thanks kindly for providing the source. Why would you make a 1:15-long arrangement of a 1:56-long original? You just know it's gonna be no good. Can you blame anyone for saying it ended before it started?

Instrumentation was decent but clearly too synthetic. Arrangement was conservative and undeveloped, but at least had some varying instrumentation ideas, as well as ornamentation within the writing, and a performance style that made it more overtly melodic than the original.

Honestly, way better than one would think given the brevity (and the typical nature of what we usually get that this long). Now try fashioning something longer, more complex and more realistic-sounding. Nothing terrible, but way below anything acceptable. Use ReMixing (http://www.ocremix.org/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=7) and Works (http://www.ocremix.org/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=13) to improve your skills and get feedback from the community.

NO

[JJT]

this is too short and underdeveloped.

NO

[DarkeSword]

this is too short and underdeveloped.

NO

Yeah. It's the same 2 bar motif played over and over again with some embellishments.

Nice piano, but seriously, a 1:15 arrangement isn't going to cut it, especially with so little source material you're working with.

NO