Yet Another Super Mario Bros. Remix-Smile'Jump'Plumb

[Kita Keru]

This is my first true remix. It's focused on percussion chords and modern sounds in the background, of course infused with parts of the Mario Overworld theme and sounds.

Please leave me constructive critique, if you can.

(Yes, I know it's short. I designed it for StepMania.)

http://www.filespoint.com/point/8872275/Smile_Jump_Plumb.mp3.html

[Jens Wulvik]

http://www.olremix.org/

[Nineko]

http://www.olremix.org/:D

Seriously.

[Kita Keru]

Thanks for the suggestion.

[zikon]

and i thought my remix didnt stand a chance on here...
i'm sorry man, but...zomg...no wait i'm not sorry. That was probly the most cheesiest thing i've ever heard in my entire life......i think i got dumber.....

[a4cts]

Ahem.
I believe he asked for constructive critique.

Anyhow, I liked it. (The concept of it.) I enjoyed it though for what it was.

It's just that it needed a lot more. It needed to lose most of the repetitive sound effects. It definetly needed better sounds more pleasing to the ears.