Super Mario RPG Ending Mix

[AMT]

http://myweb.cableone.net/rebelart/smrpg.mp3

One moment I'll love this, then the next I don't like how it sounds at all. I can't decide if it's coming along well or not. The ending part is incomplete, it's just there to kinda show the direction I'm going. Please download, listen, and leave feedback! Thanks.

[Tensei]

The Chiptune-like sound is a decent intro, but after a while it really starts getting on my nerves, so maybe you should change the melody it plays, or utilize it much less.

Personally, I really don't see where you're heading with this remix, I actually felt like sitting in a big control room chock full of beeping computers. :lol:

But seriously, you should try to implement something like a main theme that holds it all together. The Beeping sound really distracts from the melodies, especially since it's not in the same key as the melodies.

It's kinda hard to explain, but it just doesn't sound very well altogether. Good luck with it anyway!