FF7--Wutai-- Orchestral/Breakbeat style

[Hy Bound]

Ok, i made this a little while ago to submit to the FF7 Remix project but kinda lost interest in it. This sounds quite a bit like Hybrid for those of you listening to their new stuff.
The mastering is kinda smashed and the War Drums kinda overpower everything, but i would really appreciate some comments on this as to what parts you like/dislike and if there is anything i should expand on. Thanks for the comments and the link is here (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=466433)

[The Vagrance]

I'm not going to go into too much depth but I will say that everything kinda seemed underpowered to me, there was not enough substance to this mix to hit a full climax which is essential if you're going for an epic breaks type song.

[avaris]

I like the idea, i really like the idea. You should def continue with this. I agree with doomsday, there needs to be alot more subastance. Drums and beat are good(and they do overpower a slight bit) More sounds, more harmony, more melody. This is def something to expand on and work at. I like the progression of the song. The breakdown at 2:20 was nice. The ending part you could use as a huge breakout (minus that synth the last 2 seconds) Hope you keep working on it. My vote would be inbetween the 1st and 2nd choice, def keep some of the material a but there is a whole lot more that needs to be added.

[Hy Bound]

Thanks guys. Yeah, im working on another project right now which is mastered a lot like this ive found, but ive still got a looooooong way to go on it. Anyway, i really appreciate the comments so far and have already been taken into account on the song im working on now. Does anyone else have any helpful tips/suggestions?


EDIT: I'm pretty much gonna start over with the song but keep a few elements and sounds, anyone have comments on what i should add or remove from this?

[Phntm of the Opra]

I love the intro and begining but as before said you need to create some sort of climax.