Sonic Advance 3: Chaos Angel ACT 1 RMIX

[khemael]

Hi.

I'm french and i'm pretty new to remixing. I've just made this Chaos ANgel remix and I would really apreciate some commentaries. Thanx a lot

URL :

http://tchaiftp.free.fr/Wip/Khemael%20&%20Oryx%20-%20boss-Chaos%20Angel%20act1%20rmx-.ogg

[khemael]

Commentaries would be really apreciated... even if negatives. :)

[Blue Magic]

Do you mind converting this to MP3 format?

I just hate using SoundForge just to open this.

I would turn things down just a bit. According to my Db meter, you have a little clipping going on.

The intro was so sudden. I would like to here some kind of build up.

I can't really think of anything else to say about it. Its good.

Damn fine work here.

[KingTiger]

Do you mind converting this to MP3 format?

I just hate using SoundForge just to open this.

I would turn things down just a bit. According to my Db meter, you have a little clipping going on.

The intro was so sudden. I would like to here some kind of build up.

I can't really think of anything else to say about it. Its good.

Damn fine work here.

I agree with (almost) everything Blue Magic said...the thing I disagree about is the intro. It might be a little sudden, but I like it. The only thing I feel could be done there is maybe let that initial bass note go for a measure before brining in the whole groove.

The only thing that really bothers me, is it seems a little long...it seems like it should be a minute shorter.

EDIT: Parts of this remind me of the soundtrack for The Phantom Menace...

[khemael]

I'm a fervamt vorbis defender, then I won't convert it into mp3 unless ther is no other solutions (like posting to judge panel ;) ).
The intro is that sudden because this remix has been made for a Boss theme for a Sonic Fangame friends are working on.
Thanx for your comments :)