Clockwork

[Shraker Nops]

This is an origanal song I wrote about a week or so back.

I'm thinking about doing some Video Game ReMixing, but first I want to know if I'm good enough first.

Here's the link: http://media.putfile.com/Clockwork-27

Note: My new computer is being reparied so I have to use my old one right now and it's not very fast, so you may hear a few pops/clicks.

[Shraker Nops]

*Bump*

10 views...but only 1 listen? that doesn't make any sense at all...uh...a little feedback...please?

[Dash Myoku]

Well...it shouldn't be 6 and a half minutes long. Entirely too long for this track. Lots of dead spots where you sort of just drop everything but the bass parts. Not alot of variety, either. I mean, the bass is pretty much the same throughout the entire track, the leads are somewhat nice, but nothing impressive.

My opinion? Shorten the song to about 4 minutes, add more variety with the bass, drums and leads. And add some sort of strings in the back ground. Because right now, it's not worth listening to for 6 and a half minutes.

Sorry if that seemed a little harsh. But, it's probably about 2 Stars right now. x.x

[Shraker Nops]

Ya, I had feeling it was to long...shorting it in itself will remove some of the monotony, but still, more varity will be needed!

Thx for the comment...

[Dash Myoku]

Ah, it's no problem. Just givin' out an opinion, that's all. xP

[Sable]

It's very... Uh...

Quiet.

Kind of mellow and repetative. I could see it in a puzzle game or Tetris or something.

Majhong?

[Shraker Nops]

Ya, repetitive, I'm going to shorten it by a couple minutes.

It seems that people are generaly liking my ReMix (http://www.ocremix.org/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=2743236#2743236) though.

And about that Tetris comment...well, uh...I was kinda thinking about puzzle games when I was writing it, so thats kindof a compliment in an odd way.