View Full Version : Clockwork
12-12-2006, 06:15 PM
This is an origanal song I wrote about a week or so back.
I'm thinking about doing some Video Game ReMixing, but first I want to know if I'm good enough first.
Here's the link: http://media.putfile.com/Clockwork-27
Note: My new computer is being reparied so I have to use my old one right now and it's not very fast, so you may hear a few pops/clicks.
12-18-2006, 07:53 AM
10 views...but only 1 listen? that doesn't make any sense at all...uh...a little feedback...please?
12-18-2006, 08:37 PM
Well...it shouldn't be 6 and a half minutes long. Entirely too long for this track. Lots of dead spots where you sort of just drop everything but the bass parts. Not alot of variety, either. I mean, the bass is pretty much the same throughout the entire track, the leads are somewhat nice, but nothing impressive.
My opinion? Shorten the song to about 4 minutes, add more variety with the bass, drums and leads. And add some sort of strings in the back ground. Because right now, it's not worth listening to for 6 and a half minutes.
Sorry if that seemed a little harsh. But, it's probably about 2 Stars right now. x.x
12-20-2006, 02:17 AM
Ya, I had feeling it was to long...shorting it in itself will remove some of the monotony, but still, more varity will be needed!
Thx for the comment...
12-20-2006, 02:53 AM
Ah, it's no problem. Just givin' out an opinion, that's all. xP
12-21-2006, 04:39 AM
It's very... Uh...
Kind of mellow and repetative. I could see it in a puzzle game or Tetris or something.
12-23-2006, 09:08 AM
Ya, repetitive, I'm going to shorten it by a couple minutes.
It seems that people are generaly liking my ReMix (http://www.ocremix.org/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=2743236#2743236) though.
And about that Tetris comment...well, uh...I was kinda thinking about puzzle games when I was writing it, so thats kindof a compliment in an odd way.
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