[ZeroXtreem]

http://soundcloud.com/zeroxtreem/a-m...ith-swords-3-0
VERSION 3.0
Dropped an octave on the riff and made a cut out part when it comes in for the first time




http://soundcloud.com/zeroxtreem/a-m...ith-swords-v-2
VERSION 2.0

This is my finished track waiting to see what you guys think of it. It is my first actual finished track i wana know what u people think. :) Lend me a hand!

http://soundcloud.com/zeroxtreem/a-m...le-with-swords

OK i didn't do much yet and some sections need to be expanded on but i would like to get some constructive criticism for what ive got as of now. This is my first ever Remix and im new to using FruityLoops 8 so anything you possibly have to say could most likely benefit me.
Thanks in advance :)


-Zero