[urdailywater]

A piece I did back around February or March, now with a few production upgrades. I was going for something happy/cute, and I think I was influenced by a lot of songs you might here for the OP's/ED's in some slice of life anime. Then the whole song kind of gets trippy towards the end. Probably one of my favorite original songs in terms of arrangement / melody.

This is also my longest song ever, so that's something cool I guess.

Box: https://www.box.com/s/qhfu5hbfskog0z66239m
Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RHQfhhW_Wkc
Please comment/critique/whatever. I'd like to hear your thoughts in case I do stuff like this in the future. : D

[The Thin King]

That was some cool stuff man, I like it. Where did you get the image used in the video?

[confusiongrows]

This sounds pretty good, like most of the sounds, the progression and melodies, and the drums sound very clear and well used. I do wonder about one of the melodies hiding away in the background for most of the song though - when it first came in I wondered if it was slightly off key and although it seems to make more sense as it goes on I wonder if it's necessary. I'm talking about the one that fades in around 1.03 before the xylophone-like melody joins it. Is it there to provide a contrast to the lead?

That's very nitpicky of me though, otherwise this is great!

[urdailywater]

It was there more to kind of fill in space, it didn't really come to mind to change it up during the song, I just kind of let it loop throughout the song.

In my mind it was kind of acting like a bassline in a sense, since the song itself doesn't really have bass except for the arpeggio and the kick. It just wasn't really in the bass frequency range :p

That was kind of my thought process - it was used more to fill out space though. And I thought it was catchy.


Thanks for the comments :p

You can find the picture here Thin King

http://safebooru.org/index.php?page=...view&id=836697

[confusiongrows]

In that case, it's all good