[Rockos]

Ok got this work on for 2hour. I added some drum part, and added some transition. SFX were added.

And for the news! I got 2 songs in one. There is the full dub version which got the trancey part going through dubstep. This is the one worked on for the OCR.



BUT




There is this version DOWNLOADABLE AND FULLY TRANCEY END. It's mixable.


http://soundcloud.com/rockos-1/rocko...le-in-a-castle

Edit: Hope you love this borgman ;)

[Elder Kirby]

Instead of a full fade-out at the end (which would be very generic), maybe you could keep the gated lead in for about 3 seconds longer, and then fade it out from there. Just a thought.

[BorgMan]

The non-downloadable version gets my vote. It IS a little long but I'm digging your ending hardcore :3

[Rockos]

Thanks! Anyway it's in progress. Nothing is really finished! ^^

[BlackPanther]

Damn this punches like Mike Tyson! Interesting concept, I definitely like it though. I'll just say keep pressing forward with this, I have nothing constructive to say xD.

[Phonetic Hero]

I smell GrossBeat ;)

[jnWake]

I don't know much about this style of music but I have a few comments:

- The "heavy" section starting at 1:00 (app.) feels a bit repetitive, since we've heard the low-life sound quite a bit, and there's nothing really interesting there. It becomes really cool when the lead kicks in though.

- The snare... I feel like it doesn't fit. It is too soft. You need a "harsher" snare for this song imo.

- The change to a faster pace is quite cool, but like someone said, it feels a bit repetitive.

Overall, I think this is quite a nice song. I'd mainly work on the repetitiveness and on the snare.

[Rockos]

Originally Posted by Phonetic Hero

I smell GrossBeat ;)

Yes it smell but not as much as others songs I've already done ^^.

Anyway, here is an full update on the song. Small things were correcteed. Putting this in mod review.

Remix : http://soundcloud.com/rockos-1/rocko...-in-a-castle-1

Source : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=shovuvHhFDc

[Rockos]

1 more week, then it is submission time ^^

[Rozovian]

Argh, sfx intro.

Some sound effects seem poorly placed or just too loud (3:12!) and mostly just cheese up the otherwise lactose-intolerant track.

Some weird transitions, lacking mids, the bitcrushed dubstep bass has a really tiring sound.

Do you really need the 4:13 dance part? A four on the floor beat in what's otherwise an often syncopated, uneven beat doesn't quite sit right. It's also quite empty, some arpeggio or riff or something would make it more interesting.

While less jarring, the same could be said about the 2:10 part.

The source is handled creatively enough, but the track doesn't quite seem to know what to do with itself. it's like you stitched together a few ideas that, tho fine on their own, didn't quite fit together. I don't think this would pass.

A more clear direction on what this track is supposed to do, where it's supposed to go and how to get there would probably push it over the bar. Whatever you do with it, good luck. :D