[DOOMLancelot]

Hi everyone. This is my very first post on the forums and I've got this song that I'm working on that I haven't been able to continue lately because of hard drive failure. But I'm getting a whole new computer. Anyways, this is a remix of DOOM 2's MAP09 music known as Into Sandy's City. You can listen to it at the link below. Enjoy!

http://media.putfile.com/Windy-City-Demo

[Nec5]

No responses, eh?

The beginning is simple enough. The bass and main melody is catchy.

1:02'= Problems begin here with this very annoying and weak cymbal clash. Ditch it for something, anything, else. It's either that or get a new sample.

1:42'= This new synth isn't very smooth or captivating. It's a bit jarring to the ears. I'm thinking some light strings along with a somber chorus backing would be the way to go here.

Overall: Well, it is a WIP. Assuming you ever get a chance to work on this, try to add some original sections to vary things up. Compositionally, this is repetitive, so you're going to need some breaks in here.

Hope this helps and good luck with the hard drive from hell.