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Old 03-11-2009, 06:50 AM
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I love writing, and thought that I'd see what I can improve. So here's my first entry:

http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dctkqp7r_0hs5ptphj

Unfortunately, it's too long to fit on a post.... Critique is welcomed! Thanks.
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So... No critiques for the freeform entries, then?
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I knew I forgot something! I'll see what I can do, but I'm in the middle of working on my design project at the moment.
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Old 03-18-2009, 12:21 AM
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I'm proud to report that I'm finished.

I cannot provide a draft here, since it obviously exceeds the character allotment per post. Please go to http://project.revasser.net/journal/?p=27 to read it.
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Old 03-25-2009, 04:07 AM
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One week left! One week left until the end of the current round of submissions! Let's get crackin', people! *subtly reveals whip in hands*
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Old 03-26-2009, 01:20 AM
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One week left! One week left until the end of the current round of submissions! Let's get crackin', people! *subtly reveals whip in hands*
What whip?

I have something started... I still need to write the whole thing.

edit: FML. I just wasted 3 hours of my lab-work time... and wrote this.

Worn-Out Stilettos by Yousef Reda
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfzbswsw_18csfm6tdz
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Old 03-29-2009, 08:37 AM
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If there isn't one more submission, the submission stage will be extended by two weeks, no?

Ok, for real, I have a whip, and I'm not afraid to use it (though I really don't know where any of you are so.. great threat.)
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Old 03-29-2009, 03:40 PM
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If there isn't one more submission, the submission stage will be extended by two weeks, no?
One week, actually.

Don't expect anything from me, though. I've been too busy hunting for jobs and searching for apartments the past two weeks to do anything that isn't college-related. A week or two from now I should have lots of free time, but a week or two from now isn't now.
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One week, actually.

Don't expect anything from me, though. I've been too busy hunting for jobs and searching for apartments the past two weeks to do anything that isn't college-related. A week or two from now I should have lots of free time, but a week or two from now isn't now.
Your reply of 1 week puts my memory and laziness (to just check) to shame, lol.

Well, good luck to you on that, sir.
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Old 04-03-2009, 12:32 AM
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A bit late, but all things considered it doesn't matter as much...

Since we only have 3 entries at the moment, we're extending the submission stage to a week from today. So by 11:59PM on April 9th there needs to be one more entry or else we may need to scrub this round.

Anyone think the minimum entry number should be 3 instead of 4? I was thinking about this earlier, and I think it might be better if it was. If it is changed, I'll have it apply to this round as well.
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