[TroisNyxEtienne]

A few things to note:

I like the general light-heartedness of it all, and I like the pizzicato strings a lot. From 1:13 it gets better.

However, from 1:49, the melody line is drowned out by the rest of the instruments. Not sure if that was intended, but it's difficult to pick it out. The slowing down from 2:30 to 2:35 is anti-climactic in a not-very-good way: yes, it's meant to be anti-climactic, but it doesn't sound as if it's been resolved. The percussions are left hanging, and that makes all the other parts sound terribly disjointed, I find.

Also, I found the lower percussions a bit overpowering in the introduction (and the sections where there wasn't much of a bassline).

The piece ended well.

[bluelighter]

Thanks for your encouraging comment

Indeed, the melody is a little drowned at the 1'49 part. I'll fix that.

But, the final part, slower, is IMO a good way to conclude (beginning and end similar).

Thanks!