[SoulinEther]

I would've liked to hear more lyrics from Dazey, particularly in that EXHAUSTINGLY ANTICLIMACTIC ENDING ARGGGH!!! ...I envision a more epic ending with her singing something ...victorious while you rap about slaying something. Or maybe you could have just repeated your last stanza.

But otherwise, I really like this.

[kitty]

I normally don't listen to rap and I don't care for hip hop altogether but I liked the creativity in this song, albeit with some issues here and there. The big one, for me, is that the lyrics weren't delivered in a way that would get me pumped up and just didn't impress. The instrumental part of the song seemed really bland. I know in rap songs the vocals definitely outshine the instruments but there wasn't even a powerful bassline here. On the other hand the whole idea of this song is great. I wonder how it would have turned out if it was produced with a metal style in mind.

[Cyril the Wolf]

I may have found some of the rapping iffy... BUT, daaayyyuummm man.

This was equal parts epic and silly. But it takes itself seriously, so you know what?

Rock.

[A-RoN]

Originally Posted by kittykar

The big one, for me, is that the lyrics weren't delivered in a way that would get me pumped up and just didn't impress.

It doesn't take a hip-hop listener to realize that not all rap songs have a party-centred theme to it. In fact, alot of raps are created to make the listener reflect on the lyrics rather than get a drive to dance or do something different with their lives. The purpose of a radio drama is to paint a picture rather than move the crowd. Think of it as an audio version of what happens when the TV show Smallville collides with The Hero of Time on-line movie (only with cheese and quality).

[metalsnakejuice]

This is the bomb. Rap is not really my thing but this is just awesome and the lyrics are just plain fun to listen to.

I want MORE!

[bjnartowt]

This captures the "off"-vibe of Majora's Mask. The beginning is dark and frail. I think we love the samples of Link's long-fall-scream, and the Skull Kid's giggle. Lyrics slightly weak as halc said, but the chills down my spine at the excellently-captured "spirit" of the game itself more than compensate for that.

I listened to this twice when I first download it. Meaning: the taste of this remix did not take long to acquire.

djpretzel is right: Majora's Mask needs more love. (Wish I had the knowledge and resources to remix ).

Lastly: I like the rhyme about the fairy in a bottle keeping death at away.

[Brandon Strader]

The lyrics are a bit cheesy. I can definitely hear where the "musical" comment comes from. The arrangement is demented, and I may hear some (hed)p.e. influence in there, especially in the rapping. Pretty nice stuff -- good work.

[SChepulis]

A Rap I can listen to! - 4/5
- - -

Obviously, if you simply can't abide rap and/or singing in your mixes, this probably won't be your cup of tea...

That quote by djpretzel pretty much sums up how I feel about this genre. However, my typical mantra is that I enjoy any music done well, and I must say, this is certainly executed well. The intro was great and there lots of pieces that I felt really shine. Great job!

[OA]

My vote on this track didn't really cover my thoughts well on the track as a whole, for which I apologize. :/

Overall this is an awesome track and well-executed concept. Production can only get better from here on out, but having the spark of inspiration that can bring a sweet track like this to life is rare.

Absolutely love this one. Thank you for creating it.

[Nubioso]

Thank you for everyones awesome comments. It was a lot of fun making this track. I definitely recognize the production issues, especially the fact that the 2nd half isn't quite as good as the first. I will be the first to say I probably wrapped the project up too quick without really putting as much focus into the second half as much as I did the first.

Also - Yeah, I know it's cheesy, I mean come on people....it's a rap about video games....there's no way to make that "cool" or "hardcore" in anyway lol. I also realize that my rap isn't a perfect depiction of what happens in the game, but the whole point of this stuff is to have fun and bring a fantasy to life.

I have let my girlfriend know that there are a lot of people asking to hear her vocals again so naturally she's bugging me to start a new project, but we'll see what happens =P

Again, thanks to everyone who's helped me to get this song submitted. I'm definitely looking forward to my next project....whenever that may be. :D