Dr. Mack Foxx Posted April 15, 2011 Share Posted April 15, 2011 "Industrial Intrusion" http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/413303 is a more frantic-sounding version of my first original song "Industrial Ruins" http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/378759 "Industrial Intrusion" is only my third original song so far. What do you think of it? If you ask me, this tune would be good for a boss battle, an escape sequence or other such things in a video game. Hope you enjoy this track! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flo Jess Posted April 15, 2011 Share Posted April 15, 2011 The music is well, but a little bit repetitive. The athmosphere is well returned. Try to vary the music, for example make the beginning more quiet, and then something more intense in sound. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Mack Foxx Posted April 15, 2011 Author Share Posted April 15, 2011 The music is well, but a little bit repetitive. The athmosphere is well returned. Try to vary the music, for example make the beginning more quiet, and then something more intense in sound. Ah. I see. :nod: Thank you very much for checking out my song and for the suggestions. I'm learning as I go and I really appreciate the feedback. Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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