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Old 10-24-2011, 02:43 AM
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Dem Disjointed Chemicals *Chemical Plant*

http://soundcloud.com/aires/dem-chemicals Album version/live version

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Old 11-02-2011, 11:26 AM
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Old 11-02-2011, 11:52 AM
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I enjoyed this. Although my feeling is that sometimes the huge bass at around 2.00 was a little out of time - it came in just after the 2nd beat but a little too soon. Also in terms of the timing, the section around 1.26 where you were glitching and playing around with the timing, i didn't feel like it stayed in time - although I could be wrong. I felt the sense of time was lost at this point - perhaps make it more rhythmically defined.
Also the bit at 1.36 only came in ONCE! That's my fave part of the original - I'd love to see it return at the end perhaps.

I'm certainly not a house expert but these were the things that struck me.

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Old 11-02-2011, 05:05 PM
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I enjoyed this. Although my feeling is that sometimes the huge bass at around 2.00 was a little out of time - it came in just after the 2nd beat but a little too soon. Also in terms of the timing, the section around 1.26 where you were glitching and playing around with the timing, i didn't feel like it stayed in time - although I could be wrong. I felt the sense of time was lost at this point - perhaps make it more rhythmically defined.
Also the bit at 1.36 only came in ONCE! That's my fave part of the original - I'd love to see it return at the end perhaps.

I'm certainly not a house expert but these were the things that struck me.

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I know exactly what you mean, I tried to make this as disjointed as possible, maybe I over did it XD
I will try to do extention edits before upload the final. :D
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Old 11-05-2011, 04:31 PM
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I'm pretty confused. Why aren't you a posted remixer yet? This was excellent.

Anyway, my one, single, and only complaint is the total silence at 1:58. I didn't like that at all. Maybe keep the reverb going to fill that space?
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Old 11-05-2011, 04:54 PM
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Loving it. I think there's a little clutter in the upper range of the soundscape, though - too many instruments that have that high range in it. Doing a high pass on a few of the instruments might help clean that up a little bit.

The reverb, while appropriate, might also be creating some of the clutter that I'm hearing. If passing the instruments doesn't work well, cutting down on some of the reverb or high passing the reverb might just do the trick.

Personally I find the silence to be very fitting to the style. Just putting that out there.

I think this is great, though. Very fun stuff that I believe can pass, given that you fix the soundscape clutter a little bit.
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Old 11-05-2011, 07:56 PM
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Chemical Remix is bitchin'. The silence doesn't bother me either. Actually, I really haven't found much to whine about.

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Old 11-06-2011, 12:02 AM
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This is pretty sweet. I really love the disjointed house/techno vibe to the piece. I like it fits the chemical plant style great. Don't really have any constructive criticism here to add, just wanted to say I really enjoy this mix.

EDIT: actually one question, why are there like 20 seconds of silence at the end of the track? I even turned my speakers up a bunch but I can't hear anything there...
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Old 11-06-2011, 12:06 AM
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I'm liking this, good work. I agree with Ectogemia, the silence bothers me. I feel like it breaks the momentum of the song. A minor complaint in a well done track. I've listened to a bunch of your songs, I really hope you become a posted remixer soon. Good luck!
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Old 11-06-2011, 12:54 AM
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EDIT: actually one question, why are there like 20 seconds of silence at the end of the track? I even turned my speakers up a bunch but I can't hear anything there...
Incase someone wants to add this to a set (but i forgot to leave them a drum beat lol) :P

Im no longer submitting anytracks.

Hell i'll sub something if you guys think I should
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