[BrandonPerryMusic]

Originally Posted by YannickJason

I like the sad feeling of this song. I also like that it's a piano arrangement.
You've got some good progressions going on here.
Not much that I can say is bad here, there are very few songs like this that I've critiqued that are badly composed.

You definitely know what you're doing. Is this song finished, or are you planning on adding more?

Either way, I like what is done. Keep it up!

I'm going to try and continue with it.

[YannickJason]

Good. I would love to see where this one goes.

[BrandonPerryMusic]

Originally Posted by YannickJason

I like the sad feeling of this song. I also like that it's a piano arrangement.
You've got some good progressions going on here.
Not much that I can say is bad here, there are very few songs like this that I've critiqued that are badly composed.

You definitely know what you're doing. Is this song finished, or are you planning on adding more?

Either way, I like what is done. Keep it up!

Thank you, and yes I plan on adding more, it's just that I'm thinking about what next to add. I've been working on my piano skills itself and not on composition lately. I'm thinking about a full out symphony for the next part or some sort of interlude. I'll keep in touch with you guys when I finish the piece.