[Dissidia]

Should it be longer?
Should it have more variation?
Is the ending abrupt?
Is the build up too fast?

How is the mixing/mastering?

http://tindeck.com/listen/htry

[eskAe]

the mixdown is great, the strings and drums are balanced well and have a good reverb on them imo. the ending is somewhat abrupt, listening a 2nd time the most natural to me is just draw the strings out another bar. might work who knows lol.

[Dissidia]

Thanks. Is this better? http://soundcloud.com/williamthurin/grave-situation
Samplicity L-96 (free) convolution reverb on the drums.

It still doesn't sound right to me, should the lengths be a quarter note longer?

[eskAe]

Originally Posted by Dissidia

Thanks. Is this better? http://soundcloud.com/williamthurin/grave-situation
Samplicity L-96 (free) convolution reverb on the drums.

It still doesn't sound right to me, should the lengths be a quarter note longer?

yea idk man endings and openings are the toughest parts for me lol sounds alright though now. definitely about to pick up that reverb.

[Dissidia]

Ahaha I hear that, the intro is the last thing I do.
Ok I think I'll just keep it this way then. I don't want to spend more time on the last 2 bars than the rest of the song lol.