[tyrog]

Hi! I did this WIP. I'm not as professional as the OC Remixers but I'm learning.
What about?

[1makes2]

it definatly needs some work. it lacks something. it needs some drums or something to give it a grove. and when that synth comes in at 2:00 it turnes me off, than it just sort of dissapears suddenly. i also dont like how the piano drops down till you almost dont hear it. keep working its sounds good other than that

[chrono26]

the site is flipin' out. can't listen

[tyrog]

Thanks for advices. I'll try to improve it ;)

[Escariot]

Aside from the voice, it almost sounds like a MIDI rip. You definitely needs drums. Also, make sure your synths have the attack to come in at the right time. At 1:41, that choir sound is a little late on everything, and the notes aren't long enough to get any good sound out of it.

Low-qual sounds all around, and some of the creepy ambience that you're trying to build up makes it sound muddy throughout. You have a wide variety of generic synths.

[tyrog]

Originally Posted by Escariot

Low-qual sounds all around, and some of the creepy ambience that you're trying to build up makes it sound muddy throughout. You have a wide variety of generic synths.

Yeah. Consider I actually know how to use Fruity Loops for at least the 20%.
I need some experience

[POCKETMAN]

Originally Posted by tyrog

Yeah. Consider I actually know how to use Fruity Loops for at least the 20%.
I need some experience

and some better soundfonts.

you'll get there!

[tyrog]

Originally Posted by POCKETMAN

and some better soundfonts.

you'll get there!

Thanks, pal. Advices like yours help me to improve

[Escariot]

Originally Posted by tyrog

Thanks, pal. Advices like yours help me to improve

Don't get me wrong, I love the game, love the source tune, and am looking forward to further updates, you just quoted the "low qual" part of it and didn't look at the helpfulness above it.

[POCKETMAN]

http://soundfonts.darkesword.com/

Also, use more reverb.