[Xeromnesis]

This is something I think has some serious potential if i work on it hard enough. but i'll need you guys to help me out and give me some constructive criticism here... don't hold back, all tips will be taken into consideration! http://ambiteck.googlepages.com/AlterEgo.mp3

[sgx]

Dude this is pretty badass. Nice job. Are the guitars you? Got anything else like this?

[Xeromnesis]

The guitars aren't me, i googled around for some guitar samples, and i sampled them with an NNXT in Reason. I sliced it up and sequenced it together with the pitches i wanted to make it sound like one recording, which is really composed of various samples. But yeah, I've got plenty of works in progress like this one, My key genre is Industrial. Here's an update... changed the title, added in some new percussion, and an entirely different intro... http://ambiteck.googlepages.com/Hellion.mp3

[Villainelle]

Originally Posted by Xeromnesis

don't hold back, all tips will be taken into consideration!

Okay - make your sig smaller. :D

Getting a 404 on the song.

edit: Okay, I see your new post...nice start! Sound quality is great. A bit on the repetitive side. What synth are you using for the acid line? It sounds awesome.

[Xeromnesis]

The acid line is a custom combinator patch i made in reason. it's a malstrom put through scream4 distortion and unison =) there we go, sig smaller