[electric concerto]

Yeah, original names at it's worst...

I'm in the process of getting better vocals right now, maybe even the english ones...

So...

That said...

Hope you enjoy what I have so far...

http://www.e-concerto.net/music098273/realemo.mp3

Any suggestions and/or comments are welcome like always!

[Tenucha]

The vocals feel distant from the rest of the song for some reasson.
Like they dont exactly belong.
I dont know anything about creating music so I'm not entirly professional about this.

I think it be cool if the beat followed her vocal "beats" towards the end.
It just feels to me that the lyrcis need to be married into the rest of the music a 'lil more.
The music itself seems very cool however dont really reconize it has Real Emotion.
Doesnt mean its not a BAD song. I really like the music!!

If you can get better vocals please do stick with the Japanese version as I think that one turned out far better then the American version (not quality but just how the music felt and sounded using the American language versus Japanese).

I hope this was a 'lil helpful at all...?