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bananabomberman

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  1. Totally reminds me of the old school cartoon shows. Back when they were good.

    Love the lyrics.

    Only part that kinda doesn't click for me is the off-tune part. Seems like you meant to do it since the other parts are in tune.

    Just wondering what kind of effect you wanted to have there?

    Edit: Listened to the source. I see what you're doing there haha =]. Srry, I never played it before xD

    But other than great stuff. I'd like to hear more =]

  2. I think the biggest problem this song has is production. Unfortunately, I don't really know what to tell you to help with that (especially the drumset about halfway through).

    When it comes to arrangement, maybe it's just me, but it feels like it's missing a driving force. My suggestion: timpanis. They would give the whole thing a bit more cohesion, and the epicness factor would definitely improve.

    I agree, you should add in some timpanis or at least introduce some low frequencies to the first half.

    In the second half the bass is there, but perhaps you could draw it out a little and have it sustained longer? Or perhaps just kick up the bass a bit.

    I like the orchestral-ness of it =] Will be epic when it's done. hehe

  3. Great stuff. I think you're pretty much done with this mix. Just your little touch ups and fx if you want and hopefully it'll be submitting time! =]

    Edit:

    This is pretty catchy! :)

    My main critique would be the synthetic effects added to the male vocals (or vocaloid, if you used it, idk) didn't mesh with the raw ones of Melinda. I just thought it was kindof distracting. Maybe have them both sound a bit robotic or both natural.

    Good luck with your submission!

    I think that its fine to have one robotic and one natural, but if you do, I think the male vocals should be more electronic/robiticized than it is right now. Like techno or trance male vocals. For Melinda, personally I would like to hear some sustain/reverb on her vocals, but other than that I think her voice is great.

  4. Did you want it to jump right in? I think it would work really nicely with some kind of intro. Or perhaps you may want to just start a little slow and then speed the tempo up to what you have now.

    I'm not sure if its just me or not, but it sounds kind of muddy. Melody is nice as it is like the original. Maybe you can add some of your own stuff, make it more unique =]

  5. how the hell did you beat those old games on the NES

    those games are so hard

    battletoads is impossible without save states

    the first zelda is impossible without a guide (the 2nd quest at least)

    i can't imagine kids not GIVING UP for several of these games

    HOW DID YOU DO IT

    Some games have save states built in (the code thingies) But you have to have good handwriting or else you'll lose your file forever... again... And ya. pretty much persistence or play short/quick games =]

  6. My suggestions if you want to add or change stuff would be if you added some reverb, or echo, or hall-like effect or whatever to the vocals (and perhaps a little more kick to the kick drum, maybe). I think it is fine that the vocals are louder than the melody since it does carry it out quite well.

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