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AngelsDen

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  1. for Angelsden:

    Thank you for your suggestion!

    I'm still new to making music, so currently I'm still learning about using instruments properly, learning the name of the instruments, how to use it in FL Studio, and.. many basic stuffs :( still so many things to learn..

    Maybe in the future I will try to re-remix this song.. I really like it since the first time I entered a battle scene in Lufia II ^^

    Look at my Signature... years ago i was at your point too and the Community of OCRemix helped me alot to improve alot of skills.

  2. Hi Angelmei and welcome to OCRemix :D

    Regarding yor Remix i would like to give you some suggestions for the future. For Remixing break out of the Original Arrangement and absolutely make it your own Thing. The Remix you have posted sounds extremely close to its Original Source, also it could be just a remastered Midi transcription. It Sounds heavily repetetive and there is too much Reverb on some instruments. Anyway.. you have alot of potential regarding the use of instruments. They fit together so well! Keep it up and dont hesitate to try something new :D

  3. I know how hard it is to write a Soundtrack... a year ago i started to write songs for independent projects and even got the hand on a whole soundtrack. You often hit a wall or need to do changes for timing purpose, keep on balancing them or perfectly boosting the atmosphere.

    The outlines you made will still need alot of refinement, but its important that you've already made it this far.

  4. Any tips as to writing a decent contract?

    or is it something of a "Both sides agree to X and Y while collaborating on this project" or something?

    No, that would be to superficial...

    Modify one of these: http://hiphopproduction.com/free-music-contracts/

    Its hard for me to explain the important terms in english, cause my foreign language is german but i will give it a try.

    Its important to declare, that even if the Company/Indepent Creator/etc. bought your music, that the copyright still belongs to the composer and 3rd party usage, publishing or sharing without the agreement of the composer is prohibited. Also you should get the right to be mentioned in the credits.

    Declare the Songs you are selling with Name and Length...

    Only a short number of indepentend projects are blindly trustworthy and in terms of missuse or copyrighted terms the composer has to prove that it is his work and that is a pretty complex process.

    Normaly a contract is something, that the independent Label/Company/ Project Creator has to set up.

  5. You got a nice Track with this, that has a lot potential but needs some tweaking to be perfect. The slight hissing hearable from 0:01 to aprox 0:20 and appearing later again doesn't please my ears. The part from 0:22 to 0:46 has too much EQ on the high-end. The part from 1:48 to 1:55 could have a better transition.. the atmosphere gets a heavy disturbance there.

    I really love how u used the vocals and played with your present soundlibrary, modulation, filtering and so on.. keep it up! :D

  6. I'm still unsatisfied with some parts, like the Bridge at 2:10 and the Transition at 2:32 as well as the unnatural Reverb of the Piano at the beginning. For the Piano i'm using Pianissimo and the Reverb sounds perfectly clear while playing as VST in Fruity Loops. Does someone have any experience with this Problem? Also i would like to get some Feedback on the panning and loudness of the Instruments since im not used to neutral Studio-Headphones and i'm also a Fail at Mastering. ><

    http://soundcloud.com/angelsden/ambivalance-into-a-s

    Thanks

    P.S.: The Quality got a little bit affected thanks to soundcloud

  7. After hearing it i feel a bit ambivalent. The piano arrangement is realy good and the atmosphere is like u sit in the next room listening to someone playing an upright piano but on the other Hand it sounds extremely fake. The Volume is to low, but i fear that if u turn it up there would be more of noise interferences. Also the part where "the moon" kicks in sounds to different. Just like u have changed from the Upright to a Midi Grand Piano.

    the transition between he 2 different Songs is not fluid yet as well and i should also mention the ending. I think you are still working on it.. so keep it up :D

  8. Melodyne is one of the best Plugins of all "Auto-tune" Plugins i've tried so far. Antares tends to let the vocal-recordings sound like it adds a

    vocoder-effect. Melodyne itselfes is pretty expensive and has not enough features in my opinion, but the quality of what you get after editing is just marvelous and sounds more natural.

  9. I just read AkumajoBelmont and knew, that behind this thread must be something gorgeous. Your Music is just my style and your Bust a Grove Remix is still in my Playlist. Sounds like there is still some space to raise the atmosphere even more by listening only to the chorus. I'm pretty excited to listen to the finished Song.

    For critism:

    on the part "just to go with the flow and keep some things inside"

    the intonation on "things inside" sound just a little bit like it doesnt fit. Maybe a little softer intonation on "things" would be good.

    Your arrangement is solid and i think critism could only move within the filigree range to get a minimal fine-tuning :D

    Keep it up <3

  10. Nothing to complain about the arrangement.. its just perfect!

    But in Overall the Track seems pretty flat and the panning seems to mild as well. The Lead-Guitar and the support instruments like Brass, Bass and Organ are good, but the Background E-Guitar has not enough power as well as the drums.

    Keep it up <3

  11. Hmm.. sounds realy interesting *-*

    I Agree with solaphar that the Track has no atonal parts at all. But its also a matter of habituation of the ear. Just like when you first hear a sus-chord going over to a majorminor chord.

    But i would like to recommend you changing from tambourine to a variety of Hi-Hats. And The snare rim sounds like it has to much reverb.

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