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  1. Hey, I remember this one! Back when I heard it, though, it had vocals... It sounds like you took them out to focus on other things. I think it's ready to have them put back in, again. The genre calls for vocals to be the focus of attention; the background textures and harmonies are interesting and cool, but need vocals in order for this to sound complete.

    At 4:12 - 4:15 and 4:30 - 4:32, you have an electric piano in the mix. Don't get me wrong, the jazzy harmonies are nice, but the melodic work in it sounds off at those parts. Fix the melodies up, there.

    At 4:52, I really like the slap bass. Does anyone remember the game 'Utopia' for the SNES? It's bringing that to mind, for me...

    After a while, though, that cool bass becomes stale. I'd hold off on it after about 45 seconds...

    The ending needs some cleaning up. The guitar work is messy and doesn't work very well on it's own, right now.

    I'd say even though the source doesn't change up the harmonies much, you must. The four harmony sequence you repeat eventually just sounds lazy. Your gonna sing over this, right? Make a significant harmonic change for where you plan on putting your chorus, it'll help distinguish it from other parts.

    There's a part (1:12 - 1:16) where the volume turns down (or suddenly is hard-panned); whether that was intentional or not, it sounds like a mistake, right now. I'd change that.

    In general, it sounds good. It'll sound better when you get those vocals back in, though, so I'll keep an ear out on this one, again!

    Oh, there are vocals, I'm just not sure I'm at the inclination to show the other half of the track. This was mixed with Random's Splash Woman track as a bonus track on his Megaran 9 album. I'm not exactly satisfied with the track as is though, so I'm trying to clean the track up some more and submit it to OCR.

  2. I'm not exactly sure what hardware produces this sound, but it seems to get used an awful lot in contemporary jazz material. I'm not even sure if it's technically an organ haha. I apologize if this thread ends up being really retarded, I'm just trying to look for a good software solution for this sound.

    It's a very mellow, round sound and is usually used as a smooth rhythm accompaniment with a very melody driven bass, however makes for a really beautiful sounding solo instrument.

    http://www.ocremix.org/remix/OCR01440/ The chordal rhythm, and the little freestyle melodies at -3:08

    It's in the background during the verses and becomes more prevailant later in the song.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9AhzX0pou-U

  3. Oh sweet, I remember seeing this more than a year ago. This thing is really coming together haha.

    If anyone needs vocals recorded I may be able to assist.

    Some of my stuff:

    http://www.tindeck.com/audio/filestore/c/cwws-Vain_33.mp3

    http://www.tindeck.com/audio/filestore/h/hgwx-splashwoman11.mp3 (Vocals are jibberish first take on this one. HAHA)

    http://www.tindeck.com/audio/filestore/b/brap-tweakerishurt.mp3

    http://www.tindeck.com/audio/filestore/g/gfuf-lovesong.mp3 (Crappy Cover haha. This was made a LONG time ago, I've improved since then.)

  4. This is quite possibly the most amazing thing I've ever heard. Haha

    Perhaps I've just really wanted to hear someone to remix something from Warcraft 2. (I saw it on the frontpaged and was like OHHH YEAHHHHHH)

    I can't wait to see where this goes.

    It'd be nice to hear the melodies develop a bit more, because right now, while the effect is satisfying, it's like "phat beat", source, "more phat beat", source.

    Maybe do a bit more with the phat beat sections melodically to keep the tension level up. (I don't know though.)

  5. I like it - it's catchy and assertive.

    Like the poster above me (or below me...?) said, the piano is begging for some reverb. Also, I think that really fierce beat is just a little TOO hard-hitting... it makes me think of the 80's for some reason. Anyway, if it were up to me, I'd make it a tiny bit less, er, "listen to me instead of the rest of the mix or I'll punch you in the tooth!". For lack of better wording.

    Now, I think the song is good at keeping new things in the mix, but you can only get so many minutes out of so many instruments. Therefore, I really think you oughta try shortening it up a little bit - even if it is just a LITTLE bit, keeping things moving will keep the listener from feeling it's repetitive. I was feeling that the mix was getting repetitive at 2:00 and 2:45, and both of these situations could have been avoided if you had just brought the next section up a few measures sooner.

    Other than that, it's great. I loved the power the last go-round's synth, and I truly think the track has potential. If you just shortened it up a bit, its repetition would help it (getting it stuck in the listener's head later on) without hurting it (getting tiresome). Keep at it! :]

    haha, I thinks that probably because the mix dies at 2:00. It's sortof where I quit working on it save for the piano segment. I need to do some work to keep up the energy there and climax it without it getting too repetitive.

    The vocals might help.

  6. True Symphonic Orchestra? I've heard of them, mainly because James LaBrie is in it ;) I've been meaning to check them out.

    In response to what I said earliet, here's something with emotional musical qualities.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=12qdqT1dkrk

    It's a shame James Labrie sucks balls at singing haha. Coincidently, Dream Theater drives me to tears with their amazingness. XD

    Seriousness though, I had this one experience that, while not tear producing, puts me into a strange set of consciousness. I'm not exactly sure what it was, but it was like midnight on the bow of a cruise ship. I had a full view of the ocean, with the moon shining down eerily on the horizon.

    Alice In Chains was the band, the effect was encapsulating. It was an almost supernatural experience haha.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s9JtUkeeLEk

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i5vmQjUq21Y

    The Xenogears soundtrack also had some songs in the playlist...

    June Mermaid

    Good god even listening to these songs now I want to tear up.

  7. Does OCR not have a forum for trying to start collabs? I was considering using the ReQuest board but wasn't sure if it was out of the boards jurisdiction, given that I am moreso offering a "service" than requesting one.

    Basically I want to be seen as an option for vocalists in a collab scenario.

  8. Rozo: Overdoing autotune is "in" right now though, just listen to Lil Wayne. :P

    By layers, you mean like adding more instruments? I was kindof going for a laid back, minimal style, because in the past I always end up having way too much crap going on at one time. What do you think I should add to thicken the sound up a bit. (I actually just fixed it a bit, the bassline for whatever reason decided to disappear once the rhythm came in haha.)

    Regarding lyrics, maybe I didn't state it well enough here, but there aren't lyrics haha. There isn't anything decipherable because I'm really just mumbling the first word, syllable or random line that comes to mind. It helps me get a vocal line down and then I can go in and modify whatever jibberish I said into something meaningful, the same way you would go about changing the lyrics to a commercial song when you want to make a parody.

  9. http://www.cafe-blue.com/shadix/finalsplash4.mp3

    Pretty up to date version, we rewrote everything, rerecorded, slowed it down, etc.

    OLD: (Watch this mix transform)

    WIP6: http://www.tindeck.com/audio/fileshack/t/tilp-splashnewshit2.mp3

    WIP51:http://www.tindeck.com/audio/filestore/q/qzyy-waterworld9.mp3

    WIP52:http://www.tindeck.com/audio/filestore/d/dzdo-waterworld5.mp3

    WIP53:http://www.tindeck.com/audio/filestore/x/xjlt-waterworld.mp3

    WIP4: http://www.tindeck.com/audio/filestore/j/janq-splashwoman_mix2.mp3

    WIP3: http://www.tindeck.com/audio/filestore/h/hgwx-splashwoman11.mp3

    WIP2: http://www.tindeck.com/audio/filestore/k/kref-splashwoman10.mp3

    WIP1: http://www.tindeck.com/audio/filestore/s/sbjd-splashwoman7.mp3

    Source:

    I dunno, I just got this idea like two days ago, imagining what Splash Woman would sound like if it was hiphopped out. It's still pretty early, and I plan to get a friend to overdub the acoustic guitar, but look, a Megaman 9 remix even though MM9 has only been around for maybe a day?

    Don't mind the vocals, they are also placeholder until I export to Sonar. What I do when I draft vocals is overdub a track in FL Studio's very limited audio recording tools and mumble jibberish.

  10. As you may have known SAGE has been going on for the past week at http://www.sagexpo.org/ (I'm running it). Besides possibly the best game (demo) lineup we've had, there have been so many events and special guests I have to make a list:

    -Eric Iwasaki (A veteran developer from Naughty Dog. Worked on shaders and stuff.)

    -Chris Senn (You guys should know who this is)

    -Richard Wheeler (Worked on Sonic Xtreme)

    -Lee Brotherton (Dreams of an Absolution, EGGMAN Remix, Sonic Rivals soundtrack, etc)

    -Richard Jacques (We did an audio interview of this guy, composed Sonic 3D Blast, Sonic R, Mass Effect, Head Hunter, SEGA Superstars Tennis, some songs for Jet Set Radio, a mix of Dreams Dreams on the new NiGHTs game, and most recently music for Sonic Chronicles.)

    -Mike Pollock (We held a trivia gameshow over the SAGEcasts with him acting out in character while the winners of our trivia challenged him, it was freaking fun.)

    -Ryan Drummond

    You can get transcripts and times via the SAGE site.

    Saxman finally released ProSonic, Stealth released a new build of E02. Tons of fangames to check out as well.

    Basically, Howard Drossin will be appearing in the channel Friday night at 12EDT. This will be an excellent opportunity for you guys to get off all those deep dark questions about possible Michael Jackson involvement in Sonic 3, or his possible work on a soundtrack for Sonic Xtreme. Jun Senoue is also theoretically stopping by Friday to say hi.

    You can get there by our IRC channel:

    irc.rizon.net

    #sagexpo

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