Hello! I just wanted to pop in and say it sounds alot better than before and overall very good . The one thing that bothers me the most though, is that the whole track sounds almost like it comes from a pipe... a valve? My english vocabulary isn't the greatest so it's hard to explain. It's like some filter is affecting all the layers making it sound funny. The brighter the tone/layer is, the more I notice it. Try to listen from 2:20 as it is from that point it becomes the most obvious to me.
Maybe it's intentional? Imo it would sound better without it.
Best Regards
Safaex